Recount Writing about the weekend

W.A.L.T: Recall an event use where what who and how In my
story. Use Interesting facts, begin with Interesting words, have
a great explanation a great conclusion.

On a warm afternoon sunday me and my brother and our friends
from next door we went over to the Kaikohe Intermediate
School.

We went over ther to go and play hide a sieg around the whole
school and then a late afternoon about 4 o'clock me and my
brother and friends. We went for a swim in the pool at the school
we only got an hour to swim. It was very cold when my aunty
come over I was so cold I was like Ice. When I started to walk
back to give the key back to the teacher and then I started to
look at my hands and they were purple and white. Then I looked
at my legs and they were purple when I walked home my
brother was In the shower and then I started to rush him
because I was very cold. Then my aunty gave us a growling
because we weren't aloud to swim. After my shower I was still
cold then I but my onesie on plus my three Kathmandu  and one
big blanket. Then about a half an hour I just started to get
warm then I had dinner and then I went to bed.